Hitohira
August 8, 2007
For Hitohira being such an awesome show, the ending sure sucked a lot.
It should be noted that I really loved this show when it started. The general “shy girl learns to love herself and others through a certain mean!” story is one I can always get behind, but for whatever reason, the anime really seemed to lose its direction after the play had completed. All of a sudden, you take a show with a purpose: growing Mugi through stage acting, minimizing it entirely, and take away very little from the play itself, and send the show out into the great wide world.
Oh, but she got over her fears! Well…during the play anyway. She took nothing from the experience until the last three minutes of the entire show, when it hit her that alchemy was in fact a practice using the deaths from our world as a energy medium. The show could’ve still done a lot in the four or five episodes it had left, and I guess it’s noteworthy that it tried to do something, but virtually everything after the play seemed unnecessary.
I can buy into Kano leaving as a motivator for Mugi to change, so I have no issues with the plot itself, but it was just dealt with so weakly. It didn’t feel genuine and for the most part; it felt clunky. Whether the manga actually makes it all right in continuing on, I’ll have to find out myself, but the anime had a lot it simply didn’t do that it seemed it wanted to.
The early episodes really caught me off guard. This light hint of some shoujo-ai that never comes, the frank romantic tension between almost all of the characters was fun, and I was certain it was going to be my next Kashimashi: the left field anime that I fall in love with even if it’s not all top notch material. And to an extent, it still holds true as that series, except that it ended up being very flawed despite the strong art style and color palette, which were wonderful.
While the later episodes weren’t much to go on, I didn’t think, most of my beef comes with the last episode entirely. We’re taking this ride that ends around episode 7 or 8, then are forced to spend a bit more time with the characters, complete some largely unnecessary story, and then go into the last episode with almost nothing needing resolution, nothing needed tied up. There are things that wouldn’t hurt to be tied up, but honestly, the show was over, it just needed to finish its run.
The last episode became a whirlwind in the last stretch. All of a sudden, you go from a quiet slice of life show that seemed to lose its glasses, and then you’re thrown some of the most drugged out and uncalled for epic camera tricks I’ve seen since the last episode of The Prince of Tennis anime. With the last handful of minutes, Hitohira, blind from losing its glasses, stumbles forth with its hands outreached, gets its foot stuck in a manhole, smashes its face against the concrete that was swimming in a two inch deep pool of LSD, and suddenly believes it can solve world hunger through slideshow recaps and epic camera sweeps.
It’s not that I mind the camera work in the last episode, it worked for Fullmetal Alchemist, but wow…Hitohira is not that kind of show. Hitohira is not a show of sweeping revelations, not a show of profound epiphanies, not a show that is so pretentious that it finds clever uses for classical music to share its grandest moments of “Oh my god, this IS the truth!” No, it’s a show of growth and friendship, and for whatever reason, it felt clouding it in strange concluding sequences would accentuate that, failing to notice that it did no such thing.
I still come out of Hitohira positively, but I certainly don’t have the same feelings for it as when I started. And for as much as I loved it when it started, it will always be disappointing to think back to how it concluded, but this is an anime where the journey makes up for its destination. I’m just glad I was able to be able to watch it regardless of how it turned out.
Posted by Nathan S.






